Showing posts with label Week 5. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Week 5. Show all posts

Sunday, October 19, 2014

Week 5: Storytelling: The Broken Pot

The Broken Pot 
There once was a man named Miser. This man was very greedy to say the least. He had started a collection of rice that he had acquired while begging over the last few months. This rice was in a beautiful pot that he decided to put next to the fireplace so that he could look at it all day and night and dream of what would come of the rice. In his day dream this is what he thought:

Miser thought that if there ever was to be a famine, he would sell all of his rice for a hundred rupees. This rice would make him enough money to do something great. With this money he would start a little restaurant on the poorest street in town. It would be something small, and only the poor would step foot inside. Here Miser would sell dishes such as vegetable soup, bread, and the scraps of meat that no one else wanted. After a year he would sell the small restaurant making just enough profit to buy something bigger and better.

With five hundred rupees, Miser could afford to buy a restaurant in the suburbs of town. This restaurant would be twice as big and twice as nice. This restaurant would attract a middle class clientele, and he would make double the profit. Here he would serve people such as doctors, soldiers, and priests.  The typical menu would be mushroom soup, two different types of bread, chicken, and trout. After a year, Miser would make enough profits to sell the restaurant and end up with twice as much money.

With one thousand rupees, Miser would buy a restaurant in the center of the city. His restaurant would be three times bigger and better than the last one. Here he would serve his food to only the richest people of the land. Kings and Queens would regularly stop at his beloved restaurant for breakfast, lunch, and dinner. After two years Miser would have made twice as much money on profits and twice as much on selling the restaurant.  All together he would now have four thousand rupees.

The Broken Pot
With these rupees he would buy a mansion with a stable and many horses. Then he will marry a woman who would give a large dowry to him. He dreamed that would have a son who he would name Sarmon. Sarmon would love his dad very much, and he would always love to play with their horses. One day Sarmon would get to0 close to a horse and Miser will call to his wife to go get him. However, his wife would not be listening because she was cleaning the house. So Miser would get up and give her a large kick to get her attention.

As Miser was thinking about kicking his wife, he gave out a large kick and kicked the pot of rice. He kicked so hard that it went into the fireplace. The pot broke into a million pieces and all of the rice went into the burning flames along with his greedy dreams.

Author's Note: For this unit I decided to keep the story the same, but change the details of it. In the original story Miser dreams about buying animals and selling them when they reproduce and keeps buying nicer and nicer animals and selling them until he buys a mansion with four separate wings. When he is daydreaming this is what he does in the future: he starts by selling the rice to buy goats, when the goats reproduce, he sells them for cows. When the cows have calves, he sells the calves and buys buffalo. When the buffalos reproduce, he sells them for horses and he eventually will sell them for gold. He did not really even have to work for his fortune in the original. He just sells animals, but in my version he actually hast to work in order to gain money. I did not want him to just sit back and not have to do anything since he was such a greedy man. He deserved to have to work. In the original, Misers name is actually Svabhavakripana which means "born miser" so I just changed it to Miser for convenience, and also because miser means greedy.  I kept everything about the wife and son the same except the son's name is actually Somasarmon. I also changed that for convenience. Since he really does kick his wife, I had to keep that in there since that was the reason for his lost dreams. If he kicked his wife, he deserved to lose the rice into the fire.

Bibliography:
Book: Indian Fairytales
Author: Joseph Jacobs
Year Published: 1912
Web Source: Un-Textbook




Sunday, September 21, 2014

Week 5: Portfolio Styles

Portfolio Style Ideas

I think I have officially decided to the portfolio. I liked this idea because I can work as I go and pick from stories I am already reading! I would really like to have some fun with all kinds of stories. There are always a few that I cannot decide between so this gives me two stories to pick from.

First, one of the styles I find really interesting is the plot twist idea. I always love when there is something totally unexpected in a story/movie. The only thing I would be worried about is coming up with something exciting enough for the story. It seems that it would have to be something really dramatic and unexpected to make it worth the plot twist. I also think this one would only work for certain stories, not all would work well with a plot twist.

Second, I would love to do a prequel story line with a story that includes an evil villain. I think that it is a great way to either have the audience gain sympathy for the villain or hate them even more depending on what the story includes. People are always interested in what made a villain so evil and bitter in the first place.  Exploring this would be quite interesting and I think it would really captivate the reader. I would have to get really creative if I were to do this style because I would basically be making up the whole story on my own. The little issue with this style is that I would have to do write about stories that most everyone knows. This style would be great for stories like Cinderella or Snow White from the Brothers Grimm unit.

Third, I am really into horror stories and all that scary Halloween stuff so one of my ideas is to turn the stories into horror stories. I am so obsessed with scary movies, but they are never scary enough for me. This would be a really fun style for me to work with because I think it is really different and unexpected. I could even just take the characters from a story and change the story line completely. This would be really fun, but I would also have to get very creative in this style in order to make all of the stories really different.

Fourth, I think it would be fun to write the stories in a different point of view. Either from a minor character in the story, or even the main character. Most stories are not told this way, so it would be a fun way to read the story. I think you get to know more of the emotion that the character is feeling if it is told by them. A way that I could do this would be to do it as a diary. That would be kind of neat and different.

Fifth, sequels are always interesting because you get to read about the same characters, but in a totally different storyline. This could be just as interesting as the prequel idea if I did it right. I would have to really keep my readers interested. The only issue with this style is that they would have to be stories that everyone knows. I am not sure how difficult that would be since I have not really read any stories I already knew so far in this class.

Friday, September 19, 2014

Week 5: Famous Last Words

Famous Last Words
I have been very busy this week because I have had SO much to do. I took my first test of the semester today and it went really well. IT was for Wealth, Power, and Prestige. I was really nervous because we have to read eight books for that class, and we are tested over them along with lecture material. For this test we had to read "Inequality Matters." I figured I had the lecture material down pretty good, but I was so unsure about the book material. Luckily there were only two short answer questions about the book. Now I will be spending my weekend preparing for my Spanish 2113 test. I am REALLY nervous about that test. I took a year between the second Spanish class and then this Spanish class so I am a bit rusty. This class is only 3 hours compared to the 5 hours the first two levels are, but there is just as much work and material to do/remember. I am so ready to get that test over with so I can just enjoy some television or a movie or something fun!

My mom left today for Los Angeles with my grandmother for an art trip. They get to go to a ton of museums, tour artist's homes, and have cocktail parties and some dinners at the artist's homes. They are also staying at the Four Seasons in Malibu. How much better can it get? I am so jealous to say the least! However, this means I will be playing mom this week at my house! I am in charge of making dinner for my dad and sisters, and feeding my dogs! So I am going to be very busy this upcoming week, but hopefully I get some me time too :)

Me and Chris Hemsworth taken by my mom
This week I decided to post a "fun" picture! Since my mom is in L.A. this week I looked through our pictures from when we went on a family vacation to L.A. for spring break! This is me attempting to kiss Chris Hemsworth. As you can see he is VERY attractive, and he is also my celebrity crush. Unfortunately for me this is a wax figure at Madam Toussad's Wax Museum on Hollywood Boulevard (the wax figure does him no justice, he is much more attractive in person)!

Thursday, September 18, 2014

Week 5: Essay

Week 5: My Writing Experiences

When I was in high school I remember I did not like to write much. I never felt like I was good at writing, but I usually got As and Bs on all of my papers. Everyone in my family told me that I should major in something to do with writing, but I never believed in myself. Freshman year I had this awful English teacher that for some reason HATED me. I had people in the class even ask me "Why does our teacher hate you?" I honestly did not know because I had never done anything wrong to her. I got a D on my first paper for her class and I was mortified. That was the first time I ever went to a teacher's office hours and it was completely awful. She made me feel so small and stupid. She basically told me I had no idea what I was doing and that I did everything completely wrong, but she let me redo the paper. The experiences I had in her class made me feel awful about myself and I was not confident in my writing at all. 

An "A" Paper
The next semester I was taking my second and last semester of English, and I could not happier that I would not have to take it again. After having my confidence crushed, this class really changed me in the best way possible. My teacher was so great and worlds different than my first teacher. He is still one of my favorite teachers I ever had at OU. Thinking I was a horrible writer, I was so nervous to get my first paper back. I ended up getting a 95%. I was so shocked and confused, but so happy. After we turned the third paper in, he asked me to talk to him after class. Naturally I was super nervous because I had no idea what he was about to talk to me about! It ends up he told me that I should really consider majoring in professional writing or something similar. He thought that I was and excellent writer, and that I had a really different and captivating way of writing. This was one of my favorite moments from college, ever. I was so shocked and surprised that he thought I was a good enough writer to major in professional writing. I ended up getting As on all of my papers, and getting an A in the class.

Obviously I did not take that route, but I still do a lot of writing in my major. When I was still a business major I took a writing for business class, and it really helped me a lot. I learned so much from that class that I can use in my career some day. This mythology class is very writing based and I think it is really helping me with my creative writing skills which is something I definitely (and always) can improve! For Sociology, I am in a methods of social research class right now and there will be a ton of writing. For my major most of the writing is social research which I am not as familiar with, but my methods class is about to tell me all about that so I like to think I am a well rounded writer when it comes down to all of the different writing classes I have taken.

Monday, September 15, 2014

Week 5: Reading Diary: Indian Fairytales

Reading Diary A: Indian Fairytales

The Broken Pot:
I really liked this story! I thought it was funny in the end ( I actually laughed) when the pot broke. I actually did not see that coming! I think I could have some fun with this story if I decided to rewrite it! I also feel like I could modernize this one.

Cruel Crane Outwitted:
I liked this story. The crane got what he deserved in the end. He tricked all of the fish into eating them, but the crab was smart and tricked the crane into killing him and saving himself. This one would be interesting to remake.

The Tiger, the Brahmin and the Jackal:
This one was kind of fun. The man lets the tiger out, but the tiger wants to eat him now. He brings back a jackal who is trying to understand the story of how this happened, but he is really faking out the tiger to get him back into the cage.

Harisarman:
A story about a man who lies to the king and says he is magic. He ends up getting lucky 3 times when tested and ends up getting much money for it!

Reading Diary B: Indian Fairytales

The Gold-Giving Serpent:
I liked this story because it was very straight forward. There was no messing around, it got straight to the point. I think this would would be good to rewrite because it shows a good message about greed.

Pride Goeth Before a Fall:
This story was pretty good because the good guys won in the end. I like how a lot of these stories are about outsmarting or tricking the villains in the stories. I am not sure how easy this one would be to rewrite though because of the little song in the middle.

How Sun, Moon, and Wind Went Out to Dinner:
This was one of my favorites stories because it was short and simple, but had a great story. I always enjoy stories like this where it attempts to tell why something is. Like in this story for example, the reason why the sun is so hot. I find that type of story so fascinating. I would really have fun rewriting this one.
Sun, Moon, and Wind

Thursday, August 28, 2014

Google Docs Dictionary Tech Tip



Technology Tip: Google Docs Dictionary




For me, I ALWAYS get affect and effect mixed up. So I picked effect because I pretty much always using that at all times which is not good. I made sure to read the definitions of both because I just cannot get it right.